Don’t look for consistency when
asking about his identity:
he’s a cross between himself
and a stranger he has never met.
Sure feeling like a million sterling
and then some change,
the whisky in his belly
sets him in the path
of a spectral dame.
Begging for the freedom
to just pick up and leave,
by introduction he hopes
to conquer this dimensionless beast
simply born of the syllogism
of the dancefloor rhythm
and the flash of a chandelier.
Alien to mortal existence,
her skin is a wondrous tapestry
of infinite colour and complexity,
stained indelibly by a dress
that would look the height of fashion
on any other woman.
Bored of having every whim answered,
every degenerate wish granted,
she forces he pay the theft
of living in the crowded
miser’s den of private ego.
An unimaginable force keeps
this sybarite inexplicably
anchored to observable reality.
He should have been thrown out by now
but instead stands as an impertinence
to their unstated lust, tight
in the jaw, clutching an expensive single malt.
A dilettante of the vilest crime
imaginable, she tortures him
with the peculiar imagery
of crimson lips blooming
on her stony expression.
They assess each other’s
lurid intentions, painfully
aware of the suffocating
emptiness of impatience.
Wow, the whole poem is amazing but this is my favorite part:
ReplyDelete"she forces he pay the theft
of living in the crowded
miser’s den of private ego."
Thank you kindly; I'm very interested in which parts of a poem stand out to different people. This gives me an insight as to how these verses appear through different eyes.
ReplyDeleteSpeak Easy.
"He should have been thrown out by now
ReplyDeletebut instead stands as an impertinence
to their unstated lust, tight
in the jaw, clutching an expensive single malt."
The air of truth to this line and the fact that it occurs all to often makes it all the more worth the read. I enjoyed the poem and look forward to reading more.
Great way with words, Noir. Where abouts in London do you live? I just moved here.
ReplyDeleteNoir this is an amazing poem. Such great imagery in it...excelent writing!
ReplyDeleteNew to your blog, glad to have found a fellow poet!
ReplyDeletePS: The first stanza is impeccable.